Last night after yoga, my friend who reviewed the book for me, and I sat down for our frozen yogurt and discussed. Her initial thoughts:
"The book is GREAT! You either need to write the second one or tell me what's gonna happen."
To the agents currently reviewing my first 40, please note above. If we can get the first one going, we have a shot at a sequel!
She also gave me some contructive feedback on certain areas and caught more minor typos. I made the changes last last night, and I have to say, it's in excellent shape.